So much here that reminds me of people I have known. Most insecure people fit right into the roles portrayed in the article. There is a strong comparison to what is happening today, People are skeptical of themselves and use artificial means to enhance their esteem. Most of the time it is surgery or bosting about who and what they really aren't. Subconscious Fat is a good description of a persons in ability to accept who they are and be satisfied. Keep writing and lets see where this leads.
Great beginning. Good writing. Prick talking to asshole, sounds like a normal conversation, just not so wrought with preconceived notions. Can't wait until you grab hold of a topic.
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So much here that reminds me of people I have known. Most insecure people fit right into the roles portrayed in the article. There is a strong comparison to what is happening today, People are skeptical of themselves and use artificial means to enhance their esteem. Most of the time it is surgery or bosting about who and what they really aren't. Subconscious Fat is a good description of a persons in ability to accept who they are and be satisfied. Keep writing and lets see where this leads.
Thanks for your comments Richard.
Great beginning. Good writing. Prick talking to asshole, sounds like a normal conversation, just not so wrought with preconceived notions. Can't wait until you grab hold of a topic.
Thanks for the comments and compliments Bill.
Hi Hermann. Please explain the 30,000 feet and 10,000 feet thing. Thanks!